cohen.bob
09-08-2010, 14:09
Witam! J.W. wykonałem swoje pierwsze literackie tłumaczenie z polskiego na angielski. Proszę o wyrozumiałość i wytknięcie ewentualnych błędów, żebym wystrzegł się takowych podczas kolejnych prób translatorskich.
Encore! Once Again!
Got everything honest man need to have
World view, education and good health
Few women within reach, loving family
A dog, guitar, n’ officer’s armlet, really….
It’s been my aim in life, which I have goaled already
A lonely Watchman among everlasting needy
Lying by the lamp with flame n’ doors unlocked
Teaching how to jump through the sword my dog….
Don’t look on the doors, you silly puppy
Where ‘mong the snow the wolve’s track and banks of it then
Jump how I’ve told you, see how you’re jumping
Encore, Once Again!
Out of the frontier’s post nothin’ goin’ on
What I will resist or what I won’t
Gave here a pile of clothes and a man
So as to doesn’t know what do with him!
So I’m supposing, dreaming, counting holes in walls
From time to time I’d kill so irritate cockroach
Have shine in eye from wick of the lamp
Red Print on the face from my hand
Somewhere outside there is so called a “high” world
Not here, where I’m just commanding my dog
There constellations and unknown paths are still
I’m only walking through this room an feelin’ ill!
My dog is barking when he hears my spur’s clank
From the walls my guitar’s givin’ him a sound
Songs and memories are with prophecies filled
Like I’ve been my life already lived…
Sleepin’ and eatin’ my dog’s always with me
Like he would say “I’m listening to thee”
N’ I’m seeing in my window lamp, dog too
And officer who’s drinking like I do!
There’s nothing bellow those dark beams
Even to hang on a suspenders – it seems…
In me there is only childish pain and wept
Nothin’ to be ashamed , no one sees me yet!
Don’t look on the doors, you silly puppy
When I am getting drunk through all those scary ghosts around back then
And when I’m beating you don’t lick hands of your daddy
Encore! Once Again!
Encore! Once Again!
Got everything honest man need to have
World view, education and good health
Few women within reach, loving family
A dog, guitar, n’ officer’s armlet, really….
It’s been my aim in life, which I have goaled already
A lonely Watchman among everlasting needy
Lying by the lamp with flame n’ doors unlocked
Teaching how to jump through the sword my dog….
Don’t look on the doors, you silly puppy
Where ‘mong the snow the wolve’s track and banks of it then
Jump how I’ve told you, see how you’re jumping
Encore, Once Again!
Out of the frontier’s post nothin’ goin’ on
What I will resist or what I won’t
Gave here a pile of clothes and a man
So as to doesn’t know what do with him!
So I’m supposing, dreaming, counting holes in walls
From time to time I’d kill so irritate cockroach
Have shine in eye from wick of the lamp
Red Print on the face from my hand
Somewhere outside there is so called a “high” world
Not here, where I’m just commanding my dog
There constellations and unknown paths are still
I’m only walking through this room an feelin’ ill!
My dog is barking when he hears my spur’s clank
From the walls my guitar’s givin’ him a sound
Songs and memories are with prophecies filled
Like I’ve been my life already lived…
Sleepin’ and eatin’ my dog’s always with me
Like he would say “I’m listening to thee”
N’ I’m seeing in my window lamp, dog too
And officer who’s drinking like I do!
There’s nothing bellow those dark beams
Even to hang on a suspenders – it seems…
In me there is only childish pain and wept
Nothin’ to be ashamed , no one sees me yet!
Don’t look on the doors, you silly puppy
When I am getting drunk through all those scary ghosts around back then
And when I’m beating you don’t lick hands of your daddy
Encore! Once Again!